Heylo, I decided to put myself out on the critics table, I wanted to wait for when I'd have enough tracks to deserve a thread but I guess I can just keep on posting whenever I have those. Here's only one track I made recently, my hearing and pitching is so dumb that I can't even tell if I took a wrong note and I just keep going. I think I know all the flaws of it but I'm sure you can surprise me and that is the point of the thread, criticism in order to improve, that old same lie. Feel free to go harsh, I need that offense immune from the beginning!
A brief dip-in, I started developing as a singer in 2018, basically a year ago. Before that I had no clue that music can also be a science and it's not enough just to pick up a mic and remember the words. Obviously not a single clue about the music theory, keys and etc. I started at 21 years of age, now I'm nearly 23 and I never had a teacher, so. Music is poor because it's a free karaoke track, got nothing better. A pop rock cover from the past with, perhaps, the most controversial lyrics pop music ever knew. That's that.