Vels
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Join Date: September 2019
Favourite singer: Screaming Lord Sutch
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Post by Vels on Nov 16, 2019 10:07:59 GMT
Heylo, I decided to put myself out on the critics table, I wanted to wait for when I'd have enough tracks to deserve a thread but I guess I can just keep on posting whenever I have those. Here's only one track I made recently, my hearing and pitching is so dumb that I can't even tell if I took a wrong note and I just keep going. I think I know all the flaws of it but I'm sure you can surprise me and that is the point of the thread, criticism in order to improve, that old same lie. Feel free to go harsh, I need that offense immune from the beginning! files.catbox.moe/zbkxsa.mp3A brief dip-in, I started developing as a singer in 2018, basically a year ago. Before that I had no clue that music can also be a science and it's not enough just to pick up a mic and remember the words. Obviously not a single clue about the music theory, keys and etc. I started at 21 years of age, now I'm nearly 23 and I never had a teacher, so. Music is poor because it's a free karaoke track, got nothing better. A pop rock cover from the past with, perhaps, the most controversial lyrics pop music ever knew. That's that. |
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Jun 4, 2022 10:25:17 GMT
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reneasologuitar
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Post by reneasologuitar on Jun 11, 2022 23:50:56 GMT
Hi Vels,
Very nice and deep vocals!
The lyrics are so original.
I love the melody, and the tune is very catchy.
Nice recording.
Rene
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Jun 12, 2022 5:03:12 GMT
Thanks Rene, if you really think so
Your performance is a heartful of soul, too
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Sept 14, 2022 17:21:14 GMT
I still fool around with musica so I throw my first* EP in here, all originals of course, aside from my loyal buddies from long away, I got a new pal from Canada who performed one of my songs, we both liked it and I decided to put it on there
Ignoring the vox I wonder if the songs can provoke any sort of interest
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Sept 17, 2022 0:30:41 GMT
Don't pretend like you got something important to do and that you'd never listened to questionable songs before + I need your help here if you happen to stick around long enough, can anyone of you confirm the signotes I've shot out for myself in this?
Track 1: G4, A4, C5, E6. G6
Track 2: (D2?)/F2, B♭2, C3, G4, C5, D5
Track 3: G2, B♭2, G4, A4, C5
Track 4: E♭2, F2, G2, B♭2, C3, G4
Track 5: E♭2, C3, B♭4, D5, F5, B♭5, E♭6
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Sept 29, 2022 13:08:32 GMT
New concept single out, ooooh, can't be stopped www.youtube.com/watch?v=bN3NARSuB2YAnd another one here Signotes from these: Track 1 - some low note at 2:17, G4, C5, C♯6, E♭6, B6 at 1:57, or maybe it's an overtoned B5, I need a witness Track 2 - B♭2, F♯4, C♯5, F5, G♯5 If someone wanna collab I'm down, you're required to know more than one language though, I'll help out anyway I can with the rest. We take old school songs in a foreign language, rewriting lyrics in our native language and releasing them as we please it, that's pretty much it. Keeping the good old sound the way we like it |
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Oct 31, 2022 10:23:01 GMT
www.youtube.com/watch?v=y5j910FifwcAnother 'single' out, both originals from scratch. My drunken friend is a top notch reliance. The only highlight is the cover and first song's chorus. Still had to talk her into it So, building up the profile, Track 1: A1(?), C♯2, F♯2, B♭2, F♯4, G♯4, B♭4 Track 2: B♭1, E♭2, G2, B♭2, C5. E♭5, oh so easy for me
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Songwrithropist
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Post by Songwrithropist on Nov 9, 2022 5:18:02 GMT
Hear no A1 there anywhere and in the very end there it bottoms at maybe C2/D2 at best
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Dec 29, 2022 13:02:44 GMT
Oh watch me now! A brand new EP full of our concept covers!
We got the Beatles, the Stones (scuffed in demo), and most others 60s stars
Some signotes of course, overall vocarange is E2 - D5 - B5
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Post by Velsarie Vivardesque on Jun 25, 2023 3:40:29 GMT
Not in a million years would you have guessed what I'm gonna share here now
My absolute classics, just got back from the overly packed stadiums tour (that's the name of the tour btw) to find time and please my loyan fans round the web
We got here some funky instrumental, sweet female vocals and usual shit fillers that just had to be
Preorder now before folks flood the internet with their low qual covers of zis bangers
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